GRP226 Assesment One - Brief 2 (wk4)

So I've completed my final of the 4 brief for GRP226. I chose to do the Laser Eye Surgery option, I must admit I'm not really that interested in the radio/tv briefs at this stage. Having worked by myself for this componant of the assesments, I find that trying to record a commercial and be in it or direct at the same time might prove difficult- plus I dont really know how to work a camera... a whole new headache...AVERTED!

For this brief, I had to create a double page spread for Laser Eye Surgery, I had a bit of fun with it and tried to come up with some different slogans, some trying to be smart and some plain stupid.. this is what I came up with:
* Lose the Glasses, Gain appreciate from the Masses
* Don't Let glasses define you, let the real you shine through
* Feeling Framed? Release your eyes
* You CAN be a geek... without LOOKING like one
* "Men seldom make passes at girls who wear glasses" { Quote by Dorothy Parker}
* Sick of being framed? Expand your vision
* Feel boxed in? Break free from glasses (or barriers/frames/specs)
* Sick of having every picture framed? Remove the frame, It'll never be the same  (yep..pretty lame!)
* "Glasses obscure everything they don't make clear" [Quote from Joseph Joubert}
* Who needs glasses? Why not drink straight from the bottle.....
*The eyes are the window of the soul, do you want yours framed?
* Laser eye surgery, don't make a spectacle out of it!
* Not all thats beautiful needs to be framed, live outside the glasses.

I worked through a series of proofs for this one, they can all be seen on FLICKR!

My final is: